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| Try again. I don't hear your voice. Many words or expressions are bland. | I can hear your voice. Some words or expressions can be improved. | Yes! Fresh words, honest writing! I can hear you loud and clear! | ||||
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| Try again. There is little development. Add details. | Complete story. Look at your beginning or ending, how could it be made better? | Wow! Exciting vivid details, kept me reading until the end! Good job | ||||
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| Try again. What did you learn from this experience? | Good! Try using more descriptive words. How did this change your life? Did it? | I am there! I can tell why you chose this experience. Great writing! | ||||
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| Try again. Did you read your paper out loud? Some sentences are not complete. Many errors found. | Several errors remain. Try reading story out loud. Proofread carefully. | I can see the effort! Very few if any errors! I'm impressed! | ||||
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| You didn't really try. Spend more time developing ideas for writing. | Yes. I see lots of potential here. Keep working and your writing will shine. | I was touched by your writing. You really made a connection with the audience. | ||||
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