Plot Development



Brainstorming clues

Once the setting has been established and the characters have been developed, it is necessary to formulate a general idea of where the story is going to take the reader.  Some teachers may choose to create the plot line before the characters and setting; that is totally up to you.
When creating the plot line for a mystery, there is one step that is essential before beginning.  Students must determine what clues will lead the reader and the detective to the villain.  There are a couple of ideas on how to select these clues.
 

1. One suggestion would be to have each student bring in something small (or bring in several small items yourself). It does not matter what is brought in as long as it follows school rules.  They could bring in fingernail clippers, a barrette, a bottle of nail polish, a tube of lipstick, etc... Place them in a brown paper bag.
Have a student pick one of the items from the bag.  Hold the item up so the whole class can see it. Have them offer questions that need to be answered about the item in order to determine if it could be a clue.  For example: Does the item have any distinguishing marks on it that would make the detective's eye notice that it did not belong at the scene?  How could the detective determine whom it belongs to?  Does it have fingerprints on it?  Where was it found and is it unusual for it to be there? Then as a class, decide how that item could be a clue to solving a mystery.
Once they have thought about these questions for a couple of items, have them think of 3 or 4 clues for their story and answer these same questions.

2.  Another idea would be to just allow them to go ahead and establish the plot, step by step.  You could show them how following the introduction, they need to have clues that appear along the way to help the detective reach the answer to the mystery.  You could use examples such as the stories of Sherlock Holmes in order to provide examples of how the clues (even if they are subtle) help lead the reader to the conclusion.  It is usually a good idea to have them share those ideas with someone else, either a classmate, or with you in order to make sure that their ideas make sense.

Writing the Plot

Once the clues have been established, I ask for students to provide a sketch of what the plot will look like.  We fill our  events in on a plot line, or you may choose to have them create a basic outline of what will happen.
For me, It is convenient to first figure out what will be the climax of the story and then to build the events that will lead the reader to that conclusion.  You may choose to have students present that information in a different way.  As long as they have a general idea of how the pieces they have developed fit into the big picture, and you feel the pieces fit together in such a way that they make sense, then you are ready to begin the actual writing process.


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