Personal Narrative
Rubric
Holistic Scoring Guide
Distinguished (A+)
Establishes and maintains a clear focus
Strong evidence of character and setting description
Provides a message of life lesson
Careful oraganization/order of events
Uses colorful, vivid words
Control of surface features
Proficient (A)
Focused on a purpose
Good evidence of character and setting description
Provides insight
Logical order of events
Uses some vivid words
Few spelling/grammar mistakes
Apprentice (B)
An attempt to establish purpose
Communicate with audience
Some evidence of description
No evidence of message
Good organization of ideas
Uses ordinary language
Some spelling/grammar mistakes
Novice (C)
Limited awareness of purpose
No description
No message
Random/weak organization
Ineffective wording
Several spelling/gammar mistakes
(
Adapted from the Kentucky Writing Holistic Scoring Guide)