Examples of Work

Student One

1.  He beat Hertles in a fighting match and got a city named after him for winning something.
This student scored a 1 because the answer was incorrect.


Student Two

Three Column method-
Know:  List 2 of the reforms he made and explain the value.
Do:  List, explain
Answer:  he conquered a great amount of land and was not all around.  He was also known from all the wars he started for him to build him an empire.

Final Answer-
Athens was a popular city-state because of the land.  They had a lot of wars because of the land.  The persian city-state shares the same importance.  He conquered a great amount of land and was known all around by the people as Alexander the Great and this was because of the wars he started and won.
This student scored a 2 because the answer lacked detail and organization.


Student Three

Final Answer-
Alexander the Great's biggest accomplishment was his ability to conquer Asia Minor, Greece, and part of Rome.  This conquer allowed for Alexander to build a large empire and it also allowed for a large army that made it almost impossible for another country to defeat.  This affected Greece because it allowed for inventions, politics to be born, and for the settling of people.
This student scored a 3 because the answer lack detail and it also lost focus.


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